Complete-Parsley321's journey

I recently shared my resume with some friends and asked for feedback, but I’m still feeling uncertain about it. I’ve put a lot of effort into crafting it, but I can’t shake the feeling that something might be off. I received a few comments saying it looks good, but I’m looking for more specific critiques to make sure I’m presenting myself in the best light possible. Any suggestions on what to focus on or common pitfalls to avoid would be greatly appreciated!