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TheWanderer201947's journey

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    I'm currently struggling to find a retail job and I'm seeking feedback on my resume. I've received some comments suggesting that I shouldn't highlight my bad grades or my 80% attendance as an achievement. They advised me to move my BSc to the top since it's my most recent qualification and to include any relevant final year projects. Some commenters suggested I remove the skills section altogether, as they believe most of it is implied from my previous work at McDonald's. They also mentioned that including my education might make me seem overqualified and a flight risk, which could be hindering my job search. I was told to focus on the impact of my work instead, such as how I contributed to a positive customer experience or increased sales. Additionally, it was recommended that I take out my personal profile, skills, and achievements sections, and instead stretch out the rest of my resume with specific accomplishments where I went above and beyond in my roles. Overall, it seems like I need to make significant changes to my resume to improve my chances of landing a job.

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    I’m currently searching for my first retail job, but I’ve been facing a lot of rejections. I’ve tailored my resume for each application, but I’m starting to wonder if there’s something fundamentally wrong with it. I’ve never had a job before, so I don’t have any experience to draw from. I included my high school attendance and GPA, but I’ve been told that those details are irrelevant for retail positions. Some comments suggested I should remove those and focus on quantifiable achievements instead. I’m also considering reworking my personal summary to be more aligned with retail roles. I’ve been advised to highlight the skills mentioned in job descriptions and to simplify my resume to better fit the expectations of retail employers. I’m feeling a bit lost and would appreciate any further advice on how to improve my resume to land a retail job.

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